tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35844272.post6640817891276152626..comments2023-11-03T09:07:20.853+01:00Comments on Travels and Travails: Strangers on a TrainWandererhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13620645929465439067noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35844272.post-50354949048528823632009-01-08T11:45:00.000+01:002009-01-08T11:45:00.000+01:00[captain subtext] this is inspired from actual eve...[captain subtext] this is inspired from actual events, and reality being different, the answer to your question is in the negative<BR/><BR/>this is being written more to develop a writing style in preparation for my essays<BR/><BR/>please to give critical comments on the writing style:<BR/>1. does the story interest you?<BR/>2. does it come across as credible?<BR/>3. does it tell you something about the protagonist?<BR/>4. where does the plot weaken, become loose? other mistakes? other improvements?<BR/>5. what all can be done to make it more interesting?Wandererhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13620645929465439067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-35844272.post-51045308348775995262009-01-07T08:54:00.000+01:002009-01-07T08:54:00.000+01:00Completely ignoring the disclaimer that is part of...Completely ignoring the disclaimer that is part of the genre specification at the beginning, how difficult would it be to contact her anyway, if she is from your town, which is as small as you say it is.<BR/>Carpe Diem, or Carpe Dame, or whatever!<BR/><BR/>Nice story.Captain Subtexthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07510811582575286880noreply@blogger.com